Your layouts need to be shifted a bit; the top piece needs to be moved a bit to the right, so that the doorway is closer to the corner of the page, the second should be shifted to the side, and the third almost looks exactly like the second and doesn't advance the story. Also, is this for a comic page or for the three separate images. Remember, you would need three sheets to deliver, comics or illustration.
Your layouts need to be shifted a bit; the top piece needs to be moved a bit to the right, so that the doorway is closer to the corner of the page, the second should be shifted to the side, and the third almost looks exactly like the second and doesn't advance the story. Also, is this for a comic page or for the three separate images. Remember, you would need three sheets to deliver, comics or illustration.
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